i adore your writing with all my heart, this is a very intriguing demo 💜
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one thing i felt was missing was to call out MC's father for being a hypocrite; he's in love with a Republican but disowned his child for being involved with a cult leader (which, yea, a bit of a red flag) who also was very much against the Emperor. tbh i feel like Nicholas would not be a fan of that so i kinda hope it would be addressed in that route
kind of like 'seducing-your-sister's-fiancée' route. i like that you can be angry both at your father (who has an affair of his own) and Harry (it takes two to cheat, after all), who got the better end of the deal, or so it seems. and i'm very curious how they got found out, there's obviously a reason why this couldn't have been resolved quietly
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i adore your writing with all my heart, this is a very intriguing demo 💜
[SPOILER ALERT]
one thing i felt was missing was to call out MC's father for being a hypocrite; he's in love with a Republican but disowned his child for being involved with a cult leader (which, yea, a bit of a red flag) who also was very much against the Emperor. tbh i feel like Nicholas would not be a fan of that so i kinda hope it would be addressed in that route
kind of like 'seducing-your-sister's-fiancée' route. i like that you can be angry both at your father (who has an affair of his own) and Harry (it takes two to cheat, after all), who got the better end of the deal, or so it seems. and i'm very curious how they got found out, there's obviously a reason why this couldn't have been resolved quietly
OMG THIS IS SO GOOD, I LOVED IT! The story is so good, I'll wait for future updates🫶🏻
I love this 🥹😭 i hope it's not abandoned 😭. If the author still working on it, I'll patiently waiting goodluck💝
I miss this
Finally got around to reading this one and it was SO FUN. I dont think ive ever been so giddy while reading an IF. Can't wait for future updates!